Q: ok well I'm 15 and wrote this poem please give me your true opinion, i wont get offend also if u have any suggestions or ideas for the tittle that would be great =) a rush you cant explain a sence of happyness that wont go away the urge to sing when every one is around the need to skip where ever u might go when you crave to smile even if your down to lose sight of what is around to nevr whant to speak again for the sake that it might go away the kind of greedyness taht feels ok a stomach ache you look foward to each day to adore, to fancy to fall for, to prize to be nuts about to love and it does'nt matter what you say love just is that feeling we all share
A: I really liked it. Maybe you could title it 'Love the Feeling'. I don't know, I'm not much of a poet.