Q: I have a bad case of writers block! I need to show you what it means to be who you are, I've been living a lie and I want to make things right. You see my heart separates every time I let you in, So now look at me and tell me where should I begin. I am a maniac who is in his right mind, So tell me how can I leave myself behind. I smoke, I drink, I try and be someone I'm not, Cause in the end, it's the only god damn thing I've got. I have my girlfriend she is losing time, She's dwelling on me when I was in my prime, Well today I sit before the jury of a court of loneliness, That's right I am on trial for taking to the rest. Hey love affair wont you sing me to sleep, I want to see what I'm like in my dreams. Will any mirror reflect my own face, I figure it out, am I really such a disgrace. I hurt, I bleed, and I have seen everything, So what makes the difference between you and me. I guess I can admit that in this world I mean nothing, I can't wait till you relies this to.
A: Apart from the ending, I like this. The second to last paragraph is very good. It has a good idea and you deliver it well, but I'd think about changing the last one. I think the last line isn't very original, as many poems end like this, so I'd try for something bolder. Whenever I get writer's block, I take some paper and a pen with me everywhere I go and any chance I get, I write down anything, as random as they are sometimes, that comes to mind. It's a good way to capture emotions and I find that it takes the stress out of writer's block.